Descriptive writing

This week we have been doing descriptive writing about a specific photo and this is my writing
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The blood red roses darken the woods as I was blinded by the sun piercing through the trees as it makes a reflection from the creek. The sweet scent of flora covering the forest floor as the trickling water flowing softly down the stream a voice telling me to follow as she steps closer to me drowns out the creek when the metallic taste of the expired water in my bottle when I feel the nerves in my stomach telling me to run but my body decides to stay where it is in the Ice cold creek beneath me, with the frozen water leaking through my shoes I decide to stay and see what this person wants . . .

The Amusement Park!

Its 7pm on saturday and
your at the.. Amusement park!
You can see the lights on the
ferris wheel that looks like the
starry night sky or a hypnotic
state of an illusion, You can
feel the ground moving
beneath your feet like it’s
an alive monster trying to
eat you. The sky is a
gradient painting that
illuminates the fairgrounds
fading out Into the night sky
each second, You can feel
the scent of the hot dogs
rushing up your nostrils
burning them inside and
out forcing you to buy
one, You can taste the
candy floss sweetening
your mouth making you
shove more and more in.

So when are we coming back?

The Soccer Field

The Soccer Field

It's an early Sunday morning  
just before 7 you feel like
a moving ice sculpture. You can
see the sunrise peering through
the tree’s, so still they look
like they're stuck in time.
You can hear the sound of the
frost crunching each step you
take but the early morning
birds singing there calm soft
songs overpower the frost.
You can smell the bread
cooking in the toasters
of nearby houses.
Just another winter day!

First Post Of 2018! ( Acrostic Poem )

WALT: We are learning to write an acrostic poem

_____________Acrostic Poems_____________

The last 2 weeks we have been working hard on learning how to write acrostic poems. I have been enjoying this topic because we get to write about what ever we want. Here are some of my poems.