Wow Matt that's amazing. I really feel sorry for them losing their Dad. I think you really captured there sadness in the diary. its almost as if I am there to watching them.Bye.
Hey Matt! Thank you for sharing your work. I really like the way you hook the reader in with the detail you use! Are you enjoying the novel? I think it is really sad how so many children were left fatherless. Are you looking forward to going out to the Mine Site? I sure am as I love going outside of the classroom to learn new things. Keep up the hard work. Miss H
Wow Matt that's amazing. I really feel sorry for them losing their Dad. I think you really captured there sadness in the diary. its almost as if I am there to watching them.Bye.
ReplyDeleteHey Matt!
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your work. I really like the way you hook the reader in with the detail you use! Are you enjoying the novel? I think it is really sad how so many children were left fatherless. Are you looking forward to going out to the Mine Site? I sure am as I love going outside of the classroom to learn new things.
Keep up the hard work.
Miss H